Monday, 17 March 2014

Powerful Verbs!

Today we were given five minutes to write an action poem about Superman using powerful verbs. . Have a read and see what powerful verbs can you spot!

          Super Man...
Dashing hastily to stop the criminal
Springing over the huge amounts of cars that are in his way
Gliding through the tree tops of the forest
Swooping down to the rescue of people in burning houses
By Rochelle, Amelie and Samantha

           Super Man...
He sprints at turbo power speeds through the river currents
He leaps over the Kaimais saving someone clinging to the rocks
HE glides to space to save a drifting astronaut
He rescues an old lady limping across the road
By Eric, Leo and Le Roy



12 comments:

  1. Wow! k7 these poems are awesome!

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  2. nice poem Eric Leo and Le Roy

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  3. Wow your poems are real good guys.

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  4. Wow. Good poems.

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  5. Miss Dagg who's Super Man poem was the best.

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  6. Cool poems Rochelle Amelie Sam

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  7. Congratulations those sentences are really descriptive especially Rochelle, Amelie and Samantha's.

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  8. superman wow nice sam, Rochelle, amelie.

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  9. INCREDIBLE SUPER MAN POEM LEO ERIC LE ROY

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  10. I love your pomes Rochelle Amelie Sam Eric Leo Le Roy.

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  11. nice Leo le Roy and Eric

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