Even though 10 children are away, personification came out to play!!!
Today we learned that personification is when we give objects or animals human qualities. It is an exciting and fun language feature that we can use to give our writing more imagery. Check out some of our first attempts at using personification below!
The art hopped out of the wall and blasted us with colour- Damien
Noisily, the printer kissed the paper– Rowan
The door creaked and shoved me back as I tried to open it- Jas
The pegs grip on to the art, holding for dear, dear life as the last
one pops- Connor
Angrily, the ball sprints away through the air- George
The leaf blower roared, shattering the classrooms glass- Cory
Lonely, the beautiful whiteboard, dressed up with amazing
designs- Kevin
Powerfully, the magic printer fired out endless supply of
basic fact sheets -Zac F
Lonely, the broken curtain scrapped the mouldy windows-
Summer
The noisy leaf blower throws leaves off the now spotless
footpath- Jordan
Slowly, the leaf blower racketed around the school grounds
as it swallowed leaves- Kassia
Angrily, the curtain flew across the window, blocking the
suns sight- Mikki
The magical sweets kissed me goodbye as they flew down my
throat- Joe
Strongly, the yellow digger yanked out the trees in its way-
Rebecca
I love our writing and I also like our choice of personification
ReplyDeleteGreat use of personification, Room 7. I enjoyed reading your work! Mrs Corkill
ReplyDeleteI really liked the pizza that mrs pickering brought in, it was delicious.
ReplyDeleteYay cool personification Cory I really liked yours keep it up! I miss you all so much guys never forget you like the first time I met you you guys are so cool I'm just saying hi to the gang Toby kassia Logan shika and all them in all once again I miss you all so much I wish I could be there with you guys I hope you guys don't feel sad or anything no hard feelings guys don't gie up the good work and and don't worry I learnt my ÷ ;) finally
ReplyDeleteI will never forget about yous you almost made me cry when I seen the photo of xavier and kassia and all them with the pizzas :'( it's not easy moving schools I hope it's not quiet in class time without me give a shout out to the school that I miss them all
once again I miss you so much