Here is just a few of our sequin poems we wrote using powerful verbs, adjectives and nouns to describe what we thought war would be like.... More ANZAC writing to come soon.
War
Scared, lost
Wounded, crying, shooting,
Soldiers, mud, gunfire,
Died, waiting, terror,
Cold, quiet, army
Scarred
By Summer
War
Silent, injured
Screaming, dying, waiting,
Mud, poppies, Gallipoli, Last Post,
Crying, shoot, fighting,
Scars, damage
ANZAC
By Ella
Gallipoli
Fearless, heroic
Yelling Fiery Shrieking
Trenches, mud, bombs, troops
Sneaking, injured, lost
Cold, Believer
ANZAC
By Daniel
That's right we will remember them. well done to everyone who presented there poster.
ReplyDeleteMiss Dagg could you do a poster of your great grandfather? id like to see some more information about him.
we will remember them because of what they did to show we are our own country and the British getting us to make loads of ur soldiers die
ReplyDeletewe didn't mean for lots of soldiers to die
DeleteWow what lovely pieces of writing Room 7 I really like Daniel's there are some very awesome verbs and interesting adjectives in there. Well done!
ReplyDeletereally good writing
ReplyDeleteamazing writing shows just what happened in war
ReplyDeletethe writing is great and they are going in our portfilo
ReplyDeleteGREAT! Sequin poems it describe what happened at war.
ReplyDeleteAmazing writing room 7 keep it up:)
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