Thursday 13 March 2014

Firth Tower Recount

As I climbed the strong concrete stairs, my heat thumped wildly, my nerves were full of excitement. Dad was leading the way with the juniors right behind him. The tower was full of history. From corner to corner it had information about the old days. While I was walking up to the next floor I heard creaks and squeaks. Up the next floor was even better than the first floor. I nearly fainted on the third floor, it was so high! There was interesting information on the history of the tower. I learnt lots on our school trip to the Firth Tower
By Daniel Baker Simpson


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12 comments:

  1. Breea17 March 2014 at 19:07

    Well done, Daniel! It sounds like you had an amazing time at the Firth Tower

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  2. Rochelle18 March 2014 at 16:21

    Daniel you are an amazing writer. It sounds like you had fun.

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  3. Damon18 March 2014 at 16:23

    Nice recount Daniel it sounds like you had a great time at the firth tower.

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  4. Samantha18 March 2014 at 16:23

    looks fun there hope you had fun on the Firth Tower.
    Nice recount Danile.

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  5. Jaskeerat18 March 2014 at 16:23

    super work Daniell

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  6. Le Roy18 March 2014 at 16:32

    Wow the firth tower looks fun. Camp was fun too. I wonder what activities you did at the firth tower?

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  7. skylar19 March 2014 at 12:36

    Daniel wow good recount. did you have good time.

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  8. molly19 March 2014 at 12:38

    I loved Firth Tower It sounds like you did to.

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  9. TOBY19 March 2014 at 12:51

    WOW THATS ALOT OF VERBS DANNY

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  10. Leo19 March 2014 at 12:54

    Oh my goodness how old do you think that tractor would be Miss Dagg.

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  11. Wyatt19 March 2014 at 12:55

    I really enjoyed Firth Tower.

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  12. John Simpson23 March 2014 at 13:37

    Nice recount Danny, good work! It was a great day and there was a lot to see.
    Dad

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