Monday 8 September 2014

Descriptive Writing

Delightful Treats
Slurping his little ice cream on her miniature table, the alert minuscule baby piglet is content stuffing her mouth with divine ice cream. Charlotte has a baby pink snout with a small cute smile. Delighted she has a pink body with black spots dappled all over her. Satisfied the piglet twitches her mini ears in interest, trying to catch every little drop before it falls to the luscious grass in the meadow. Crying in delight she is filled with happiness. Charlotte the piggy loves her delicious little treat.

By Caitlyn



Greedy Pig Learns a Lesson!
“Deeeelicious!” thinks the greedy pig. White creaming ice cream drips down his frozen nose. Plonking himself down, he starts to cruise after a hard day’s work. Sunbathing pig twitches his nose when leaning over the creamy blob. Pigs dark blue seat starts to bend under his weight as he easts more and more. BANG! Silly pig soon learns his lesson.

By Eric




4 comments:

  1. That pig is super cute it lips are coved in ice cream.

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  2. I really like your piece of writing lara!! very creative

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  3. oops i meant caitlyn. this sort of writing was sooooooooooo fun!

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  4. you are so right Jordan E that pig is sooo cute :-) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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