Sunday 7 September 2014

I can see a rainbow....

Did anyone else see the magical double rainbow last Tuesday at about 5 o'clock?!  I wonder who's lucky farm had the pot of gold sitting in the middle of their paddock.... 
Your challenge is to write a descriptive sentence/ paragraph about it (Tip: think about what we have been talking about during writing!) I look forward to reading your sentences in the comments below ;)



11 comments:

  1. Gasps of delight, filter throw the cloudy sky. Rainbows Painted across the sky, sun filters throw whipping the grey clouds. light flutters onto the luscious green grass.

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  2. Two lonely rainbows sat in the sky as people drove past and approached there home's looking in amazement at what nature can provide.

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  3. The colourful lines sprouted from the ground making a ......... in the grey sky above us.

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  4. Wow! A double blast of colour, it spreads out of the sky, grey clouds surround a stunning view. I wonder if the pot of gold, lays beyond a dark line of smooshed together trees.

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  5. The colour are bright as can be .

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  6. Boom! The double blast of colour brightens the lonely sky.

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  7. ''STOP" I yelled to Mum "I see a double rainbow". With beating hearts we try to reach the gleaming pot of gold but can only imagine the treasures it must hold as we will never find it. the shimmering rainbow still puts a smile on my face though.

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  8. Lighting up the sky, I spy a bright and vivid rainbow. Surrounding it, lie smoky grey clouds, situated in front of the vibrant blue sky. As my curious eyes slip downward, I detect lines of frail farm fences and leafless trees. Am I dreaming?

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  9. The rainbow shines brightly over the damp world

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  10. The magic of the beautiful sight shines over the luscious paddock.

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  11. Kapow! double rainbow stretches over the dark and mysterious sky as the bright colours light it up like a firework.

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